Tears of an Angel
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Title: Tears of an Angel
Writer: Tacuma
Pairing: TezukaFuji
Genre: AU, angst
Word count: 1427
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis nor do I own the song 'Tears of an Angel', it's from RyanDan
A/N: For
milkyxduckie , because she posted this song on her LJ, which made lots of plot bunnies appear in my head. But also for
elysis , because it's her birthday tomorrow ^_^
Before you start reading, play the song. Read while listening to it, then you might get the feeling of the story
Tears of an Angel
Tezuka hated war. Still he worked at the one place where the smell of gunpowder never wavered: battlefield.
He worked as a doctor, in charge of the ten other doctors that tried to help the wounded soldiers. There were two tents. The biggest one was for the men that had small wounds or broken bones. They were treated, and sent back to their own tent, or they stayed for a few days before they returned. The other tent was smaller, and contained only a few beds. The soldiers who couldn't be treated anymore stayed there, waiting for death to come.
None of the doctors liked to work in the smaller tent. Some didn't even want to enter the place. Tezuka was the only one who went there every day to check on his patients, to see if there was anything he could do for them. He didn't see the fear in their eyes, nor did he hear the screams of pain anymore. He had seen too many deaths.
Until one day the routine was broken. Tezuka was working in the smaller tent, treating one of his patients when someone entered, panting heavily, screaming for help.
And now one of those men was standing in the smaller tent. His face was pale, his sleek hair light brown, and his eyes bright blue. His cheeks were stained from weeping. His eyes were red from crying.
He stood still, and watched the boy. Forced to kill or his family would die. Those helpless blue eyes begged him for help.
'Silence!' shouted Tezuka. Everybody stood still, and watched him. Tezuka walked to the boy, and pulled up his shirt. The timer on the bomb said they had nine minutes left.
'Get everything out of here that is movable within five minutes!' ordered Tezuka. 'Get it to the other tent. Bring the patients that still have a minor chance of living to the other tent as well, and then stay away.'
'But…' protested one of the others.
'NOW!' shouted Tezuka.
'Are you insane?!' asked Oishi, Tezuka's right hand.
'Don't you see?' asked Tezuka, not looking at the other doctor. 'He has to die or his family will die, and instead of running to the tents of the general he comes here, to the only place where people are already dying, and can't be helped anymore. He came here, crying for help, because he doesn't want to do this, Oishi!'
'What's your name?' asked Tezuka, trying to cut the thick leather and metal belt around the boy's waist.
'Fuji Syuusuke,' answered the boy.
'Thank you for coming here, Fuji.'
Tezuka sighed, and grabbed something that might be able to burn the belt. He let the flames lick the leather. The smell of burning leather and skin was horrible, and he could see tears welling up in the boy's eyes.
'I'm sorry,' said Tezuka. 'I'm sorry for hurting you.'
The honey-haired shook his head.
'I'm not giving up,' said Tezuka, more to himself than to the boy. He grabbed a knife he used for surgery. Somebody had forgotten to take it. Tezuka attacked the belt with the knife. He cut his own finger, but didn't pay any attention to it. He let the blood drip down his hand on the floor. He focused on only one thing: get rid of that bomb.
'Two more minutes, Oishi. I come when there is one minute left,' answered Tezuka. He checked the time.
1.23
1.22
1.21
'One more minute!' said Oishi and he ran away, to the other tent, far from the bomb, safe from the explosion that they all knew would come soon.
Tezuka's hand were bleeding all over by now. He didn't care about the world anymore. All he wanted was to free this boy On his first day here on the battlefield, seven years ago, he had cried. It had been the only time. He also cried on this last one. Tears were filling his eyes, blinding his sight.
'What's your name?'
'Tezuka Kunimitsu.'
'Thank you, Tezuka,' he whispered.
'I'm sorry,' whispered Tezuka.
The boy shook his head, and smiled again.
'You're an angel.'
Arms were wrapped tighter. The boy buried his face in Tezuka's neck, and Tezuka buried his nose in the boy's hair. It smelled refreshing after smelling nothing else than war, and blood for the last years.
The General come running from his tent. 'What happened?'
Oishi turned around. There were tears in his eyes, but also a hint of a smile on his face.
'Tezuka,' he said.
The General nodded. He swallowed, hiding his sadness, stopping his tears. He coughed, and stood up straight, regaining his composure.
' Contact his family, then come to me to give me a detailed report. I'll be in my tent. It's about time we start having peace negotiations.'
Writer: Tacuma
Pairing: TezukaFuji
Genre: AU, angst
Word count: 1427
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis nor do I own the song 'Tears of an Angel', it's from RyanDan
A/N: For
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Before you start reading, play the song. Read while listening to it, then you might get the feeling of the story
Tears of an Angel
Tezuka hated war. Still he worked at the one place where the smell of gunpowder never wavered: battlefield.
He worked as a doctor, in charge of the ten other doctors that tried to help the wounded soldiers. There were two tents. The biggest one was for the men that had small wounds or broken bones. They were treated, and sent back to their own tent, or they stayed for a few days before they returned. The other tent was smaller, and contained only a few beds. The soldiers who couldn't be treated anymore stayed there, waiting for death to come.
None of the doctors liked to work in the smaller tent. Some didn't even want to enter the place. Tezuka was the only one who went there every day to check on his patients, to see if there was anything he could do for them. He didn't see the fear in their eyes, nor did he hear the screams of pain anymore. He had seen too many deaths.
Cover my eyes
Cover my ears
Tell me these words are a lie
Until one day the routine was broken. Tezuka was working in the smaller tent, treating one of his patients when someone entered, panting heavily, screaming for help.
Stop every clock
And now one of those men was standing in the smaller tent. His face was pale, his sleek hair light brown, and his eyes bright blue. His cheeks were stained from weeping. His eyes were red from crying.
Tears of an Angel
An angel of Death
He stood still, and watched the boy. Forced to kill or his family would die. Those helpless blue eyes begged him for help.
'Silence!' shouted Tezuka. Everybody stood still, and watched him. Tezuka walked to the boy, and pulled up his shirt. The timer on the bomb said they had nine minutes left.
'Get everything out of here that is movable within five minutes!' ordered Tezuka. 'Get it to the other tent. Bring the patients that still have a minor chance of living to the other tent as well, and then stay away.'
'But…' protested one of the others.
'NOW!' shouted Tezuka.
I'm here, don't you fear
'Are you insane?!' asked Oishi, Tezuka's right hand.
'Don't you see?' asked Tezuka, not looking at the other doctor. 'He has to die or his family will die, and instead of running to the tents of the general he comes here, to the only place where people are already dying, and can't be helped anymore. He came here, crying for help, because he doesn't want to do this, Oishi!'
Tears of an Angel
'What's your name?' asked Tezuka, trying to cut the thick leather and metal belt around the boy's waist.
'Fuji Syuusuke,' answered the boy.
'Thank you for coming here, Fuji.'
I won't let you slip away from me
Tezuka sighed, and grabbed something that might be able to burn the belt. He let the flames lick the leather. The smell of burning leather and skin was horrible, and he could see tears welling up in the boy's eyes.
'I'm sorry,' said Tezuka. 'I'm sorry for hurting you.'
The honey-haired shook his head.
So hold on
Be strong
'I'm not giving up,' said Tezuka, more to himself than to the boy. He grabbed a knife he used for surgery. Somebody had forgotten to take it. Tezuka attacked the belt with the knife. He cut his own finger, but didn't pay any attention to it. He let the blood drip down his hand on the floor. He focused on only one thing: get rid of that bomb.
I won't let you fly
I won't say goodbye
'Two more minutes, Oishi. I come when there is one minute left,' answered Tezuka. He checked the time.
1.23
1.22
1.21
'One more minute!' said Oishi and he ran away, to the other tent, far from the bomb, safe from the explosion that they all knew would come soon.
Tezuka's hand were bleeding all over by now. He didn't care about the world anymore. All he wanted was to free this boy On his first day here on the battlefield, seven years ago, he had cried. It had been the only time. He also cried on this last one. Tears were filling his eyes, blinding his sight.
Tears of an Angel
'What's your name?'
'Tezuka Kunimitsu.'
'Thank you, Tezuka,' he whispered.
It cant be true
That I'm losing you
'I'm sorry,' whispered Tezuka.
The boy shook his head, and smiled again.
'You're an angel.'
Arms were wrapped tighter. The boy buried his face in Tezuka's neck, and Tezuka buried his nose in the boy's hair. It smelled refreshing after smelling nothing else than war, and blood for the last years.
Little one, don't let go
The General come running from his tent. 'What happened?'
Oishi turned around. There were tears in his eyes, but also a hint of a smile on his face.
'Tezuka,' he said.
The General nodded. He swallowed, hiding his sadness, stopping his tears. He coughed, and stood up straight, regaining his composure.
' Contact his family, then come to me to give me a detailed report. I'll be in my tent. It's about time we start having peace negotiations.'
Cover my eyes
Cover my ears
Tell me these words are a lie
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18/4/10 10:32 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 10:38 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 12:41 (UTC)but at least bith of them died together.. me is happy~ :)
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18/4/10 12:42 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 12:47 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 12:49 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 14:10 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 14:12 (UTC)(no subject)
18/4/10 16:03 (UTC)It was really well-written; you're improving by leaps and bounds! I really look forward to reading your future fics ^^
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18/4/10 16:30 (UTC)Arigatou *blushing* ^_^" It all really depends on my mood and my muse and I guess I was in a good mood for this. I was crying while writing it ^_^"
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18/4/10 17:31 (UTC)And this would be the longest comment I ever leave...for now, unless you're on a killing spree at any time soon....^___^"
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18/4/10 17:35 (UTC)I told you, you would hate me. I couldn't help it! Plot bunnies forced me!
No, next is DT or more pron
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18/4/10 17:49 (UTC)That is good! Write more TezuFuji kink for me!
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18/4/10 17:59 (UTC)Eh, you think so? Then please nominate me for the 2010 competition later ^_^
XD I hope it will be good!
(no subject)
18/4/10 18:16 (UTC)LOL, I will, if I know how to nominate you. You have to teach me that as well >.< yoroshiku ne, sensei!
I hope so too! Looking forward to read it XD
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18/4/10 18:36 (UTC)XD Not so difficult. Just go to the website of the UFO awards and go to nominate. They'll explain there.
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18/4/10 18:44 (UTC)Yes, I will do that, but I'm turning in for tonight. see you next time! I'll tell you when I visit the UFO page!
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18/4/10 18:08 (UTC)The songs fits it so perfectly and you made me all teary eyed....
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18/4/10 18:35 (UTC)(no subject)
19/4/10 10:42 (UTC)thank you for writing and sharing this! *glomps*
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19/4/10 10:55 (UTC)I miss you Kana-chan! I wish I could see you again
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18/4/10 20:22 (UTC)Actually it's a sad story, right? (slaps hereself for smiling)
It's a good fic and the song fits completely!
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19/4/10 06:37 (UTC)Lol, yes it is, but I'm glad you can still smile. I didn't make everybody sad ^_^"
Thank you!
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19/4/10 03:38 (UTC)Beautifully written for a very sad fic. I never read TeFu fics when I know that someone might die. But I know the song, and I couldn't stop myself reading this.
Once again, another great fic!!
♥
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19/4/10 06:38 (UTC)That song is beautiful, ne? When I heard it I knew I had to write a fic about it and it turned out this way. I'll write something happier next time.
Thank you!
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19/4/10 21:52 (UTC)(no subject)
20/4/10 07:19 (UTC)(no subject)
20/4/10 00:25 (UTC)Wonderful angst...another wonderful fic from Ann-chan!
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20/4/10 07:23 (UTC)Thank you so much Junn-chan! *huggles*
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20/4/10 07:59 (UTC)I am way too descriptive to a fault...I should learn from you...
oooh, have an idea for your Detective Tezuka interested? Sort of came to mind after reading a yahoo news article. *smiles*
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20/4/10 08:03 (UTC)Thank you! You should try then ^_^
Yes, please tell me! I've started a new case already, but I might be able to use it for a next case! ^_^
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20/4/10 08:18 (UTC)(no subject)
22/4/10 15:19 (UTC)but somehow I think any other ending might have either felt like cheating or turned this into a multi-part story. And wartime multi-part stories are bound to turn dark, one way or another [usually at least] <.<
That said, while the story was incredibly sad, I much enjoyed reading it. ^^ Tezuka's actions struck me as special - but as it's Fuji concerned, well... Poor Fuji, though. *sob*
Thank you very much for sharing!
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22/4/10 17:19 (UTC)I wanted to write another ending, with Tezuka surviving, or Fuji surviving, or even both, but it felt wrong, not real. So in the end I killed them both.
Thank you! Glad you could still enjoy it. Tezuka had seen so many deaths, he wanted to save this boy who wanted to save his family by killing half-dead people.
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23/4/10 03:57 (UTC)Mou, but at least they died together. Nicely written and the end wraps up the whole tragic atmosphere in this fic. I love when Tezuka just embraced Fuji at the end before the bomb exploded--it pulls at the heartstrings, you know. T-T
Thank you for sharing, Ann-chan!
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23/4/10 06:29 (UTC)Glad to hear you think it's beautiful. I hope I didn't make you cry ^_^"
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24/4/10 20:06 (UTC)The idea was really refreshing. I've read quite a lot of war/battle related fics, but no one shares the similar idea with this one. Both Tezuka and Fuji were such a gentle-heart (as well as Oishi), and it was very in-character for them to do what they did in the fic. And they were both as intelligent as usual too.
Thou I have a feeling that it would be better if the word "pairing" in the fic description could change to just "characters". But it is just my own feeling :)
And finally, thank you so much Ann-chan! You're the first one to give me such a heart-breaking birthday present Lol
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25/4/10 09:45 (UTC)You think they were IC? Thanks. I didn't know if Tezuka was IC like this, he even cried.
They're not really a pair. It's just Tezuka an Fuji ^_^
Lol, I thought you wouldn't mind a heart-breaking b-day fic. Some other people really wouldn't like it ^_^"
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10/5/10 19:39 (UTC)Too bad they both die, but at least you didn't make Tezuka abandon Fuji, ne?
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11/5/10 06:29 (UTC)No, Tezuka would never abandom Fuji! Not even when they don't know each other
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11/5/10 16:26 (UTC)(no subject)
11/5/10 16:32 (UTC)(no subject)
11/5/10 16:43 (UTC)So, I'm guessing this is your favourite pairing out of the PoT fandom?
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11/5/10 18:09 (UTC)(no subject)
12/5/10 00:24 (UTC)Me likey Royal Pair and Adorable Pair. But TezukaFuji is the best, ne? Oh btw, I like your layout and userpics x]
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12/5/10 06:28 (UTC)Thank you! ^__^ I got this lay-out for my birthday ^_^
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12/5/10 19:04 (UTC)That's nice!
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13/5/10 08:20 (UTC)