I was browsing my flist when I saw your fic come up in tenipuri, so I decided to give it a read from the beginning (hence why I'm commenting TWO YEARS after you posted this lol)...
My first thought: YOU KILLED SAEKI!! D: Other than that, I really liked this chapter and I'm going to read the others when I take a break from studying for finals haha. Good job!
Just one thing: "So he is shot" ... should be "he was shot". Just letting you know ^_^
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My first thought: YOU KILLED SAEKI!! D: Other than that, I really liked this chapter and I'm going to read the others when I take a break from studying for finals haha. Good job!
Just one thing: "So he is shot" ... should be "he was shot". Just letting you know ^_^