woa both are so sad... T__T
I like the "Angels fall first"
"You were needed elsewhere. You were needed to remind us of the shortness of our time. But I know you will be there. You’ll still light my path, you will guard me. Now I know that it’s true.

It’s true that angels fall first."
this part struck me deeply... for no reason xD
really nice angst you have written ^^ *thumbs up*
I wish you had killed both of them in the same fic so they could be happy together in the afterlife =p