Firstly, I did like to say this. Don't pay attention to any weird reviews on ff.net that says about how the story wasn't good because it was too open-ended; people will have different preferences and just because they are unable to appreciate certain styles of writing doesn't mean that the story is not a good one. In my own opinion, stories like this flourish precisely because of its open-ended nature; there is a certain degree of mystery and anticipation regarding the unanswered questions that draws readers of the story in and is perfect to expound on with a possible sequel. Even if no sequel is written, the piece would be able to stand well on its own and in fact would generate lots of discussion regarding the many possible ways the story could develop in. That I am sure, is something many writers often aim to achieve with their works :)
At occasional moments, Tezuka felt a little OOC but that's pretty forgiveable since I myself admit that it's not an easy task to always make the character's words and actions fit his/her personality; I am guilty as well of it xD;; In any case, we will improve with more writing and understanding of the characters so it's no worries!:3 As a side note, I feel that Fuji's characterisation is quite well done so hurray for pulling that off!^_~
One of my rare comments successfully made on your entries; gomen ne!>< You have probably figured out what's sucking up all my time lol! In any case, I am still glad I managed to squeeze in this one!
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12/5/12 02:46 (UTC)At occasional moments, Tezuka felt a little OOC but that's pretty forgiveable since I myself admit that it's not an easy task to always make the character's words and actions fit his/her personality; I am guilty as well of it xD;; In any case, we will improve with more writing and understanding of the characters so it's no worries!:3 As a side note, I feel that Fuji's characterisation is quite well done so hurray for pulling that off!^_~
One of my rare comments successfully made on your entries; gomen ne!>< You have probably figured out what's sucking up all my time lol! In any case, I am still glad I managed to squeeze in this one!