That was .... probably my favourite chapter up until now. The chase in the beginning is wonderful, but I really liked how you made the characters act like themselves in the situations...
Inui using percentages, Echizen being a rather petulant Frodo and Atobe as Elrond made me laugh hard. ("welcome to ore-sama's humble abode"). And the council scene... Kawamura's burning mode works wonders, Fuji-Kaidou bitching is as new as refreshing and Echizen being made to go is love. Oyaji Bilbo is simply wonderful too... as is Inui....
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Inui using percentages, Echizen being a rather petulant Frodo and Atobe as Elrond made me laugh hard. ("welcome to ore-sama's humble abode"). And the council scene... Kawamura's burning mode works wonders, Fuji-Kaidou bitching is as new as refreshing and Echizen being made to go is love. Oyaji Bilbo is simply wonderful too... as is Inui....
Thank you for sharing!