ext_166326 ([identity profile] paranoid-fridge.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tacuma 2010-03-12 06:39 pm (UTC)

That was .... probably my favourite chapter up until now. The chase in the beginning is wonderful, but I really liked how you made the characters act like themselves in the situations...

Inui using percentages, Echizen being a rather petulant Frodo and Atobe as Elrond made me laugh hard. ("welcome to ore-sama's humble abode"). And the council scene... Kawamura's burning mode works wonders, Fuji-Kaidou bitching is as new as refreshing and Echizen being made to go is love. Oyaji Bilbo is simply wonderful too... as is Inui....

Thank you for sharing!

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