I really like this so far! It’s cute and amusing and interesting.
There’s so many funny moments initially: -Inui offering juice to hobbit children and their mothers protecting their children form him is funny! -Echizen making a girl cry :P -Only 45% chance of survival XD
But half way through, it defintiely got intriguing! And the ending…omg you left it at a cliffy!!! But inui vs yanagi was awesome. I’m looking forward to the next part. Update soon <3
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10/8/09 18:04 (UTC)There’s so many funny moments initially:
-Inui offering juice to hobbit children and their mothers protecting their children form him is funny!
-Echizen making a girl cry :P
-Only 45% chance of survival XD
But half way through, it defintiely got intriguing!
And the ending…omg you left it at a cliffy!!! But inui vs yanagi was awesome. I’m looking forward to the next part. Update soon <3